Well Hello again! Here's a much better quality of the Chapter 1 Preview! It should be out by next Friday and then we should be on schedule from then. That means that after Chapter 1 comes out, There will be a Chapter every Friday and a preview every Sunday. Ok then let's read!
January 20th, 2011
That night caused the chance I needed. I never knew what I was doing to myself. I had to start over or else something worse would happen. So I did….
My eyes fluttered and I could see white everywhere. The lights were bright and seemed to shine directly into my face. The room was somewhat bright and dull. I felt a rough fabric against my skin. What is this place? Why am I here?
I mumbled some incoherent words.
“Mhmph…Grgl…”
Suddenly a voice pops up from the side of the white room.
“Jada! Jada are you awake?”
Could it possibly be her?
Out of nowhere a hand pats me softly.
“W-whoo….” I stammer out…..
“Jada, Oh Jada please open your eyes!”
I start to blink and get a good look at the room. And there on my right side sitting at
the side of the bed was her. I could feel her presence and the sadness leaking throughout the room.
“N-aaa-talia?” I whisper just audibly, as I stare at her
“Yes….It’s me Jada”
I rub my eyes in disbelief. This can't be good at all....
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Chloe
This is really good! You should definitely continue, I like the suspense, but don't always do cliffhangers or I'll get all GRRRR! :)
ReplyDeleteIntrigued to know exactly what happened to Jada
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